Friday, February 25, 2011

Thank you!

Mr. Cordes has gotten us new MacBooks! Thank you Mr. Cordes because their new and we have a TOUCH PAD!! So for the people who read this from Adams Elementary School read this make sure to give Mr. Cordes a big "Thank You!" when you walk by him. He has done us a very good job so again give him a great big "Thank You!"

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Shiloh from Shiloh

Shiloh is the nicest dog you could ever wish for. He sits when you say to sit he fetches when you say to fetch he will follow any of your commands. Shiloh is like a beagle puppy you couldn't even imagine. His life and Marty's were meant to be together. He gives Shiloh a rub on the head when they go for a run. Shiloh is an amazing dog. He rolls over like a good dog. Shiloh was bought by Judd Travers. Shiloh didn't like Judd the first minute he touched eye to eye at him. Shiloh can't even run 15 feet without Marty. Marty looks after Shiloh.

Judd from Shiloh

Judd is a nasty person who always has tobacco in his mouth. He always pulls tricks on people once he tricked a blind old man to pay $20 for milk. He took the money and had $20 more in his wallet. Judd spits tobacco out of his mouth at Marty. Like I said he is a nasty person. He has atleast 8 dogs in his trailer. 1 is Shiloh but he ran away. He told Marty that if you don't see him just whistle he always comes back if you whistle. Now do you see why he is bad.

Marty from Shiloh

Marty is a wise young boy he loves animals very much. His aunt is in the hospital so every penny they got they gave it to the hospital to help their aunt. He doesn't eat any type of animal although he has to, to live. One day he found a beagle when he was practicing his aim with his .22 rifle. He doesn't need to kill anything because he's happy the way he is. His life is great except his father thinks the beagle belongs to Judd. But that's another story. Marty collects cans and bottles so that he has enough to buy food for the dog. He sneaks atleast half of his food out of the house for Shiloh every night.                                  Shiloh is actually looking better now from when he was with Marty. Marty has a very good time with Shiloh now and then in the meadow over the hill where Shiloh hides. 

Friday, February 18, 2011

Chapters 1-7 Shiloh

Chapter 1 
    The day Shiloh came, was when we had a big Sunday dinner. He was VERY skinny from what I saw, but he was actually a poor and hungry dog. He looked sad but I couldn't tell because he was like 50 feet away. I wondered how he was going to live here but he kept following me back to my house. He slept under the chicken coop that night. I told my father about this and he saw it was a Beagle. He wandered if it was Judd Travers dog because he heard that he lost a dog a few weeks ago.                                    

Chapter 2-3                                                                                                                                                  Every supper we have is leftover from lunch. I worried about that Beagle. Dad and I went over to Judd Travers Trailer. About 20 seconds before we got there dogs were barking. He had seven dogs he said that it was his.    Chapter 3 I dream of Shiloh every night though I am hungry. I saw Shiloh again in the woods he was a little skinnier but I hid him under an Oak tree so that he won't get wet.  He was very quiet so I would bring him food every now and then atleast 3 times a day. I got hungry but if it's to keep a dog safe I will. I'm starting to collect cans to help Shiloh.

Chapter 4-5
   Judd doesn't name his dogs he usually justs says bad words or dog 1,dog 2,dog 3,dog 4 that's it. I decided to let Shiloh run free sometimes but he doesn't run far without me. He is a good dog. Every day I give him part of my breakfast, lunch and dinner and he is happy about it. Ma asks if I want to practice shooting.  Chapter 5   I have three problems 1 'where to keep Shiloh check'  2'Would Shiloh be quiet check' 3 'How am I going to sneak food out of the house for Shiloh uncheck. Shiloh is standing on his hind legs now waiting for me. Shiloh always gives me a lick when I bring him food. Judd wants me to wait for Shiloh. I've got atleast 20 cans.

Chapter 6-7
   It was raining and I was worried about Shiloh. He only had a tree to cover him. I could hear him whimpering in my thoughts. My thoughts are not always right so I just imagine it. Dad took me on his morning paper route. Chapter 7  My friend David just got back from his vacation. He always wants me to come over or he comes over.  I went over to see Shiloh he was sitting there and I thought Judd found him. David asked me if I wanted to come over that noon. I went over and I didn't talk about Shiloh. After that was done I went over to the market to get food for Shiloh.

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Shiloh Prediction

    I think the boy is very sad so he finds this dog somewhere where he lives he saw it had no collar so he decided to keep him, he brung it home so he could hear from his parents and see if it is yes or no. The only reason he brung the puppy so that he could show them him and to make sure he did not have to look for it again. One day the dog runs away close to the beach and the boy is right on his tail. The boy catches the dog and he is very happy nothing can spread them apart. He got a leash and took Shiloh for a walk. They saw a person who was a very poor man who looked like he could use some food the boy gave him some money, right when that happened Shiloh bolted out of there and back home. The boy was so close to grabbing him so right now he is still looking for Shiloh when he is home. It was 6:30 pm the boy had headed home he saw some bushes rustling.
   He saw Shiloh run away he ran after his vision of Shiloh. The only reason he saw Shiloh was because he missed Shiloh very much. He saw it go into his house but he didn't know was that Shiloh really was in there this entire time, so hey was happy that he found Shiloh.
   That is my prediction.

Friday, February 4, 2011

Chapters 16-17 The Castle in The Attic

Chapter 16
Calender had just froze Alastor in lead. William had just also took the medallion from Calender to make sure that he had it. Every gaurd just went to their knees. Brian said "We wish not to fight you". William didn't say anything. He was still sad that Sir Simon was in lead again. William just walked over and hugged the leaded Silver Knight. He felt a rush go through Sir Simon. He looked up and saw Sir Simon move his chin. He was alive! William could not believe it, he hugged the rest and they came back to life to.

Chapter 17
William has gone pretty far now that he is a squire. William is at the castle with Mrs. Phillips. He was glad that he was home. He went upstairs to the grand room where Mrs. Phillips said that there was a stone sculpture in the room. William looked around but he could not see a stone sculpture. Mrs. Phillips said to look to the left corner. He saw Alastor in lead. He couldn't believe it in here! They went to the draw bridge and William used the token to make Mrs. Phillips to grow. Mrs. Phillips grabbed Alastor and said that she was going to drop these things in the Atlantic Ocean. Mrs. Phillips grew William and             Mrs. Phillips was gone from the bus stop.         
                                                                         The End